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Hasham's avatar

“Time just loves you/ to death”.

Truly wonderful! 🫶🙏🏽

Daniel Nathan Terry's avatar

Think of you often, Sebastian.

JC Bear's avatar

I want to curse you…for that perfect beautiful last line…that captures absolute truth…and the reason for poetry…AARRRGGGHHHHH…my heart!…don’t call 911…ill walk it off…like a 49 year old.

Daniel Nathan Terry's avatar

Omg—thank you so much.

Christopher Phelps's avatar

It's worth repeating myself here: This poem's got a visceral heart and an ingenious finish. This is why I love "puns": occasionally they punch.

Sierra Tango's avatar

Beautiful. Every word

Daniel Nathan Terry's avatar

Thank you so, so much.🩵

David Linebarger's avatar

The turn to time is perfect here. Good poem! Deserves some accolades, Daniel.

It’s Me From The Mirror's avatar

Thoroughly enjoyed this🫶🏾

Amie Whittemore's avatar

so wonderful, much needed.