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Reiter's Block's avatar

"veined with cirrus, bird, and contrail" had such lovely sounds that I had to reread the poem several times!

Anthony DiPietro's avatar

"We’d fucked so hard the bed had bounced us off." Iambic pentameter never sounded so good! :)

IamSterp's avatar

Outstanding, I can see the scene.